Sunday, 20 March 2016

Some of our Writing

Our target was to write about an event of our choice and try to include some of our thoughts and feelings.  These stories achieved that don’t you think?


There is a new girl moving to Raumati Beach School. Her name is Asha.  She is moving here after the holidays.  I am so excited.  I am going to be her friend and monkey bar buddy.  But I know she isn’t going to be in my class but she’s my friend anyway.
Isabella

Never!  Yesterday I was playing with Steve, my Lego minecraft toy, and Zombie my other Lego minecraft toy.  But!!! I lost it outside.  “Wa, wa, wa!!!  I am scared Jack is going to find it!!!  And I am getting bored without it.  I think it is going to be gone forever!
Bradley
Yesterday I learnt how to do a flip on the trampoline.  I was amazed how I could do that!  It was fantastic!  I showed my Mum and Dad.  They were amazed too!  Was is possible?  Spectacular! I can do it.  Next I’m learning back flips.

Isabelle. 

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